He was born for great things, that he knew. What it was ,he did not know yet but he could feel it, he could feel it beating along with his heart in constant competition ,teasing and reminding it that Faith was just as important. The others did not understand, they were too content within the confinements of the “see-through” wall, for them it was the world and it was enough. For Ranchu, it was a prison, a prison that shrunk along with time. Sometimes he could swear that he felt the wall closing in and then the cold invisible hands of panic would choke him ,leaving him gasping for breath. The dreams of the world that lay beyond the wall haunted him and grew on him like a tumor.
The wall was a marvel,it could not be seen but it was there..cold and solid like reality . There were times when the fortification would vibrate ,as if awakening from a long deep slumber ,sending ripples of unadulterated excitement through his body and on excruciatingly rare occasions when the light from the “small sun” (inside)and the real sun(outside) embraced like long lost brothers,the wall would rejoice and mimic life of its own.Ranchu spent hours staring into the eyes of his ghost,sometimes with the playful pleasure of the young and unwanting, sometimes with the deep melancholy of a lover looking into the eyes of his beloved for the last time.It was hard to imagine that the humans had created such a wonder,but then again humans were capable of great things,evil things,the invisible prison stood testament to that end.
Another incomplete "piece". I started this one about 2 months ago (for a friend). After the first 2 paragraphs..it just felt wrong....not wrong really...it just felt like it "wasn't me"...go figure..right??
ReplyDeleteMaybe,this piece does reflect a part of me...."incomplete"..that is.Damn..Im gettin all "backstreet boysy" !! lol . Someone please shoot me before i start dressin like one of 'em !!!!
whatever this Ranchu is, my heart goes out to him. i sincerely hope Ranchu is outta tht hell. do sumthin!!!! can i expect that of a knave? well u only just stole the tarts...... WAITING, finish the piece before i bite off my nails completely plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ReplyDelete@ :) ...thanx !! Ranchu is a type of Goldfish..It's a japanese name (i think).Google it...if u wanna..think u'll get to see wot i'm talkin about. Will try to work on this piece again..but i wouldn't hold my breath if i were you !!! cheers. Keep readin n commentin...!!
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